Part of my intent here is to show process.
"Under" has been particularly hard for me to work on; I get claustrophobic just thinking about it. I came up with some formal qualities that pleased me well enough. The last time you saw 'Under' it was like this. Given all the tape, it looked rough and as I said then, I was not distressed.
Here it is, taped removed.
I added the part that I meant as a positive force, but I found that it was only confusing.
I brightened the flashlights.....
.....and I dulled them down.